http://tech.blorge.com/Structure: /2007/01/17/man-looses-weight-on-wii-diet/ Technology news Sun, 22 Nov 2009 16:15:02 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 http://tech.blorge.com/Structure:/2007/01/17/man-looses-weight-on-wii-diet/comment-page-1/#comment-29361 Marie Sun, 09 Sep 2007 22:28:24 +0000 http://tech.blorge.com/Structure: /2007/01/17/man-looses-weight-on-wii-diet/#comment-29361 Hi, your article was informative. I was wondering whether you passed high school English class. Your spelling of "hoping" rather than "hopping" might pass for a typo, but your use of "loose" for "lose" or "loosing" instead of "losing" is rather poor. And your use of the semi-colon to separate your clauses is also indicative of poor English grammar. It doesn't really matter, but again, your job is writing. At the least, you could propagate some standards of English. Hi, your article was informative. I was wondering whether you passed high school English class. Your spelling of “hoping” rather than “hopping” might pass for a typo, but your use of “loose” for “lose” or “loosing” instead of “losing” is rather poor. And your use of the semi-colon to separate your clauses is also indicative of poor English grammar. It doesn’t really matter, but again, your job is writing. At the least, you could propagate some standards of English.

]]> http://tech.blorge.com/Structure:/2007/01/17/man-looses-weight-on-wii-diet/comment-page-1/#comment-3281 Caroline Wed, 17 Jan 2007 22:41:45 +0000 http://tech.blorge.com/Structure: /2007/01/17/man-looses-weight-on-wii-diet/#comment-3281 Whatever is takes! Competition, which video games supply, can be a great motivator. If it keeps you coming back and getting more exercise than you would get otherwise, it's an improvement. Whatever is takes! Competition, which video games supply, can be a great motivator. If it keeps you coming back and getting more exercise than you would get otherwise, it’s an improvement.

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